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Co prawda mój angielski nie stoi na wysokim poziomie, jdnak z drobn± pomoc± słownika udało mi się skeić opowiadanko na lekcję angielskiego
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It was about 10 months, aobut 7:00 P.M., when I was walking with my friend in downtown and we found a pile of bags full of something with stange, but strangely familiar form... We stepped up to the bags, unpacked one of them and we couldn't belive our eyes:
There were about seven 9mm caliber guns and machine pistols. We wanted call the police, when the sniper bullet flew beside my head! I looked arround and saw a black man, about 20 years old, dressed in black baseball hat and blue shirt with AK Kalashnikov rifle. He looked at me and took aim, when my friend Kamil pushed me, I fell onto ground and about 10 bullets flew over my head! I looked at Kamil, he was OK, and we started running to the closest alley. We ran as fast as we can, then in front of us stood three gangsters with pistols and Submachine UZI. They asked us ahat were we doing here and what have we seen. We tried to tell them that we were ging to fast food only, and didn't know about any deals in this place. My friend yelled that we don't want to die, and then they took their pistols lower. They ordered us to go away and don't call the police if we don't want any trouble. We agreed with them and went to our favourite fast food to eat a big piece of a hot chciken. Few days later I rode in press that last time our city is a good place for making deals by black street gangs from west coast of US, and european drugrunners, and besides Russian Mafia is involved in weapons deals from Russia and countries of former Union of Soviet Socialist rtepublics. I rode too, that police and counter terrorists forces are preparing for massive assault on gangsers headquaters. I can't belive that I was a witness of one of these deals...
[ Dodano: 2009-10-24, 18:27 ]
humm
It was about 10 months
skoro bylo 10 miesiecy temu, to 10 months ago
blabla aobut 7:00 P.M
at 7:00 moze by lepiej brzmialo
in downtown and we found
tu nie mam pewnosci, ale nie ma czasem byc perfect?
we've found
belive
to pewnie literowka, ale believe
We wanted call the police
to call the police
when the sniper bullet flew beside my head!
nie wiem jak to rozumiec, pocisk snajpera czy pocisk snajperski?
! I looked arround and saw
ja bym dal noticed zamiast saw
We ran as fast as we can,
skoro biegliscie, to nie powinno byc could zamiast can?
~wiecej nie widze, moze z przemeczenia, moze z braku wiekszej wiedzy, a moze juz nie ma
pozatym te moje poprawki tez moga byc zle
a tak to fajne
dzięki chrupson :* dobrze, że napisałe¶, zwróce uwage na te rzeczy w przyszło¶ci <piwo>
Dluuugie Opowiadanko
Hiszpan się nie wypowiada ?? ?? ?? ...Przecież to jest po English
Musze to przezucic na translate nie chce mi sie myslec:D Ale dobra rzecz cwicz cwicz anglieski:D
Fabuła niezła, ale nad angielskim to ty musisz jeszcze popracować
nie wiem jak to rozumiec, pocisk snajpera czy pocisk snajperski?
Pocisk snajperski. Jakby miało być pocisk snajpera to powinno być sniper's bullet